It is a truth, universally acknowledged, that all writers fall prey to overwriting at one time or another.
Sometimes when you sit down to write, the mind can wander and sentences become as long as a winter evening, or your typical episode of The Wire. There is nothing wrong with it, but writing is like life: it needs variety.
Run-on sentences also distract the writer and the reader and also force the reader to work harder to follow the story.
Here are a few tricks to help trim the excess:
Activate Readability statistics on your computer and it will count you average word count per sentence and how this appeals to a reader. Remember you want to work with an average number of words. You should also try to vary the length of your sentences, just to keep things interesting.
Count your Commas
If you are not listing items, and your sentence has more than three commas, you should consider splitting the sentence into two.
Conjunctions join sentences. Find them and decide if you can remove them and make two sentences instead of one.
One Paragraph, One Thought
The first line of your paragraph usually tells you what to expect from the rest of it. Readers tend to focus on the first line and skim the rest, so if you have two or three crucial points later in the same paragraph, your reader may miss them.
Remove Redundant Words
Remove words that don’t add value. If you can remove a word from the sentence and it doesn’t change the meaning of the sentence, you don’t need the word.
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